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PostPosted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 4:37 pm    Post subject: Windowmart trade Ltd :) Reply with quote

I recently posted an ad for a fellow business of ours on 4networking & My Local forums
It was probably the most amazingly worded 'thing' i've ever constructed, see what I did there..

anyway here it is;

Hey guys.

Writing this on behalf of a business who work in the same building as we do.
So excuse my in-depth lack of their work base and such.

The company is called <advert removed>
the ownder is Bob Parham, he's a genuinely nice guy
Now, these guys do;

Windows,
Doors,
Conservatories,
Kitchen Installation,
Bathroom Installation,
General Building Work

It's small business who work right in the next room to us, Bob is a great guy who looks after his customers, obviously he's looking for long term clients.
He's based in Laindon, Essex, as I said, with us. He is very willing to take on any kind of work, in the catergory's above of course.

You can contact Bob if you would like further infomation on

<advert removed>

You can also visit his site

<advert removed>

thanks alot
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 6:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I've edited your posting because we don't want this forum to be used as a receptacle for advertising for Bob the Builder - or any other such adverts.

Since you asked about the wording of the ad itself, I think you ought to check the spelling and grammar. There are an awful lot of mistakes.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 10:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ofine be that way D:
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 5:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Am I missing something here?

I don't really 'get' why you posted that, and why you think it's amazingly worded. As Kay points out, it's full of errors.

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